“The Magical Ms. Bre” by Nicole

Nicole was telling me that she has started writing a story at school and she is excited that she gets to finish it tomorrow. I suggested she could write a story at home to show her teacher and this is the story she wrote:
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“The Magical Ms Bre  By:  Nicole”

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“Once there was a teacher named Ms. Bre.  She was nice and good.  She was smart and magical and she was funny.”  (word bubble with nonsense word = Ms. Bre being funny)

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“Ms. Bre was silly and amazing.  She could do many magic tricks with her wand.”  (Wand is saying “try me.”)

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“She could make students know how to spell words with her wand.”  “She could make students love to read.”

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“She could use her magic to make students know how to write stories.”

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“After school, she used her magic to make her imagination come to real life.” (pictures are of a unicorn and a beautiful princess with a wand coming out of the thought bubble)

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“One day she accidentally imagined a lot of evil bad guys.”

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“The bad guys did Karate.”

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“Ms. Bre read a book about a huge elephant.”

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“The elephant came to life.”

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“The elephant learned to fight.”

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“The elephant fighted the bad guys.”

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“Ms Bre learned to be more careful with her imagination and she rode her new elephant to school everyday.”

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“Spectrum Academy”

Here is a picture of Nicole reading her story to her grandparents and aunts:

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Here is a video of Nicole reading her story:

 

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